Suggesting our Changed Pitch to Matt

In our pitch to Matt for the second time we had been given advice on how to change our initial idea. Some of the ideas given to use by Matt had been to change the girl from her being in the car when the guy gets shot to her leaving the car in order for her to get her phone that she had forgotten. By doing so that gives a sense of her not being a part on whats going to happen between the man and the killer. Then afterwards there is a cross cut of the girl about to leave the parking lot while sending a text on her phone that she had after all. When she leaves we are able to see the mysterious man with a brief case enter the parking lot. As the mysterious man walks up closer, he shoots the man in the car with the standard handgun. When the man gets shot his head swings into the steering wheel and the car horn starts honking, there then is match on action with the girl leaving the parking lot while the car horn is still going off. The woman walks up to a different car which had been waiting for her on the ground floor and she gets in, when she gets in she is handed a envelope. This signifies that this had not been her first mission in killing people and it presents her in being a spy of some sort.